Monday, April 27, 2009

magic touch

In my mirror mind

something seems reflecting

visual to outer world

as my face keeps glowing



it's just a natural smile

for others who saw

inside soul entangled with

all shades of rainbow



when cool breeze is blowing

feel ur fragrance around flowing

heart's ponding with peacock dance

where r my senses going



am not within myself

nothing desire much

feel like am being in heaven

effect of ur magic touch.

60 comments:

आशीष खण्डेलवाल (Ashish Khandelwal) said...

beautiful thoughts..

आदर्श राठौर said...

nice blog.
ur compositions are really very beautiful and touching...

शारदा अरोरा said...

very nice poem , who is controling gestures ? defititely the one who manipulates the heart.is'nt it?

Harkirat Haqeer said...

when cool breeze is blowing
feel ur fragrance around flowing
heart's ponding with peacock dance
where r my senses going


बहुत खूब महक जी ....!!

दिगम्बर नासवा said...

What an excellent imagination........wonderful thoughts......

राकेश जैन said...

touch of some one in this way !

like Potter gives life to the clay..

Nice poem Mehek Ji.

Mrs. Asha Joglekar said...

खूपच सुंदर . प्रेमात काही जादूच असते जे अंतरबाह्य बदल घडवतं.Really a magic touch.

रवीन्द्र दास said...

it was really magic touch, great!

surjit said...

Beautiful depiction of the inner self:
'..am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch...'
You have a wonderful blog.
God bless.

Nirmla Kapila said...

dil ko chhoo liya yoon to blog ki mehak se hi dil khush ho jata hai shubhkaamnayen

Prem Farrukhabadi said...

please !!
write something fresh.

kamal ashique said...

achcha prayas hai

Pramod Kumar Kush 'tanha' said...

am not within myself

nothing desire much

feel like am being in heaven

effect of ur magic touch.

-Excellent feeling...great expressions...congratulations for wonderful line...

Ravi Srivastava said...

Thanks for coming in 'MERI PATRIKA'. Some lines specially for you....

"My love with u is like an onion which has many layers in it. it will add taste to ur life but if u try to cut it, u will have tears in ur eyes."

~PakKaramu~ said...

Pak karamu reading your blog

Science Bloggers Association said...

नाइस पोयम।

-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }

अल्पना वर्मा said...

Beautiful poem mahak aur tumhari profile picture bhi badi pyari hai..aaj hi yah blog dekha...Usually word press wale par hi jaatey hain..

M Verma said...

In my mirror mind

something seems reflecting

This reflection is so positive that leaves us with our reflection..
such a nice poem

दर्पण साह "दर्शन" said...

flawless !!

am not within myself

nothing desire much

feel like am being in heaven

effect of ur magic touch....

..that touch has to be of ur's SOMEONE !! or may be SOMEONE WHO IS EVERYONE... :)

vikram7 said...

Most beautiful

Dimps said...

Hi...

Excellent creation!

Regards,
Dimple
http://poemshub.blogspot.com

हया said...

Excellent expressions...
Thanks for visiting my blog.

Haya

‘नज़र’ said...

बहुत बढ़िया
--
श्री युक्तेश्वर गिरि के चार युग

डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री मयंक said...

Nice poem Mehek Ji.
beautiful thoughts.
congratulations.

Dr. Chandra Kumar Jain said...

SIMPLE BUT DEEP.
======================
Dr.Chandrakumat Jain

प्रसन्न वदन चतुर्वेदी said...

"am not within myself

nothing desire much

feel like am being in heaven

effect of ur magic touch."
ये पंक्तियां बहुत अच्छी लगी....

Harkirat Haqeer said...

am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch.


beautiful thoughts.....!

Udan Tashtari said...

बहुत कोमल भाव लिए एक बहुत सुन्दर रचना.

anil said...

महक जी बड़ी ही सुन्दर रचना है आपकी अगली पोस्ट का इंतजार रहेगा धन्यवाद .

Mrs. Asha Joglekar said...

माझ्या ब्लॉग वर नेहेमीच तुझी टिप्पणी खूप छान असते . पण खूप दिवसांत तुझं काही वाचायला नाही मिळालं. लौकरच मिळेल असं वाटतंय.
Let the blog world get filled with your fragrance.

Ravi Srivastava said...

Thanks for coming in 'MERI PATRIKA'. I hope you will now write something new in your blog.
I am waiting for....

"लोकेन्द्र" said...

it was really magic touch............. & excellent expressions...................
congratulations.............

लता 'हया' said...

thanks and love ur flowers..

-latahaya

आकांक्षा~Akanksha said...

Nice one.

संतोष कुमार सिंह said...

पिंकी को न्याय मिले इस अभियान में आप सहयोग करे

Nirbhay Jain said...

bahut achha hai
roses bhi kafi pyare hai

karuna said...

mahak Its our inner feelings which comes out through our words ,In my mirror mind something seems reflecting ,This is reality in human life .babhai

Dhiraj Shah said...

nice post
नजरे इनायत करने के लिये धन्यवाद

रंजीत said...

only poet ,
only poem,
can inter such kind of word
- A world of emotion
- A world of Love


Great
Ranjit

Science Bloggers Association said...

Nice poem.
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }

महामंत्री - तस्लीम said...

Sundar kavita.
Kripya ise update karti rahen.
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }

Prem Farrukhabadi said...

aap apne aap se naraz kyon ho.kuchh to likha karo man halka ho jayega.asha hai jaroor likhogi.dhanybaad

Prem Farrukhabadi said...

mahek ji,
aap apne aap se naraz kyon ho.kuchh to likha karo man halka ho jayega.asha hai jaroor likhogi.dhanybaad

अर्चना तिवारी said...

Its so beautiful poem

mehek said...

@farukkhabadi ji,hum bhala apne aap se kyun naraz rahenge:),actualy am not very active on this blog,whenever i feel i write here,am more active on my hindi blog,http://mehhekk.wordpress.com/

रवि धवन said...

wow! magic of words.......

अमिताभ श्रीवास्तव said...

excellent..
effect of ur magic touch...।
अच्छी सोच, बेहतर शब्द और कायदे से लिपिबध्द।
God bless.

ruchi rai said...

जी शुक्रिया मेरे ब्लॉग पर आकर उसे एक नज़र देखने का और विचारों को सराहने के लिये , बस एक छोटी सी कोशिश की है, लिखने का वक्त नही मिलता बस अभी शुरुयात की है । वैसे ,सच में बहुत खूबसूरत लिखती हैं आप । आपका ब्लॉग आज ही देखा है, मुझे अच्छा लगा ।

लता 'हया' said...

thanks.lovely poem.

chahati hun dilon mein mahekti rahun
main hun khushabu wafa ki hawa chahiye.

Neelesh K. Jain said...

Touch touches only when nothing touches you any more.
Touching one!
Neelesh Jainhttp://www.yoursaarathi.blogspot.com/

महामंत्री - तस्लीम said...

Real magic.
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }

आचार्य संजीव वर्मा 'सलिल' said...

nice poem.

Prem said...

a nice poem,very well expressed.thanks for coming to my blog.

aleem azmi said...

beautiful mahek ji nice to c urs blogs ....its really very gud
please visit my blogs too
hope must u enjoy

Harish Joshi said...

aapki MAGIC TOUCH ne sachmuch magic kar diya aur blog is too beautiful .....gulabon ki tarah MAHAKTA hai ...

केतन कनौजिया 'शाइर' said...

beautifully penned.. :)

विपिन बिहारी गोयल said...

wonderful poems.keep it up.
http://vipingoyal.wordpress.com/

vikram7 said...

महक जी
स्‍वतंत्रता दिवस की हार्दिक शुभकामनायें

दिगम्बर नासवा said...

Why no new poem for such a long time.......

चाहत said...

Nice