In my mirror mind
something seems reflecting
visual to outer world
as my face keeps glowing
it's just a natural smile
for others who saw
inside soul entangled with
all shades of rainbow
when cool breeze is blowing
feel ur fragrance around flowing
heart's ponding with peacock dance
where r my senses going
am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch.
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beautiful thoughts..
nice blog.
ur compositions are really very beautiful and touching...
very nice poem , who is controling gestures ? defititely the one who manipulates the heart.is'nt it?
when cool breeze is blowing
feel ur fragrance around flowing
heart's ponding with peacock dance
where r my senses going
बहुत खूब महक जी ....!!
What an excellent imagination........wonderful thoughts......
touch of some one in this way !
like Potter gives life to the clay..
Nice poem Mehek Ji.
खूपच सुंदर . प्रेमात काही जादूच असते जे अंतरबाह्य बदल घडवतं.Really a magic touch.
it was really magic touch, great!
Beautiful depiction of the inner self:
'..am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch...'
You have a wonderful blog.
God bless.
dil ko chhoo liya yoon to blog ki mehak se hi dil khush ho jata hai shubhkaamnayen
please !!
write something fresh.
achcha prayas hai
am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch.
-Excellent feeling...great expressions...congratulations for wonderful line...
Thanks for coming in 'MERI PATRIKA'. Some lines specially for you....
"My love with u is like an onion which has many layers in it. it will add taste to ur life but if u try to cut it, u will have tears in ur eyes."
नाइस पोयम।
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }
Beautiful poem mahak aur tumhari profile picture bhi badi pyari hai..aaj hi yah blog dekha...Usually word press wale par hi jaatey hain..
In my mirror mind
something seems reflecting
This reflection is so positive that leaves us with our reflection..
such a nice poem
flawless !!
am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch....
..that touch has to be of ur's SOMEONE !! or may be SOMEONE WHO IS EVERYONE... :)
Most beautiful
Hi...
Excellent creation!
Regards,
Dimple
http://poemshub.blogspot.com
Excellent expressions...
Thanks for visiting my blog.
Haya
बहुत बढ़िया
--
श्री युक्तेश्वर गिरि के चार युग
Nice poem Mehek Ji.
beautiful thoughts.
congratulations.
SIMPLE BUT DEEP.
======================
Dr.Chandrakumat Jain
"am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch."
ये पंक्तियां बहुत अच्छी लगी....
am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch.
beautiful thoughts.....!
बहुत कोमल भाव लिए एक बहुत सुन्दर रचना.
महक जी बड़ी ही सुन्दर रचना है आपकी अगली पोस्ट का इंतजार रहेगा धन्यवाद .
माझ्या ब्लॉग वर नेहेमीच तुझी टिप्पणी खूप छान असते . पण खूप दिवसांत तुझं काही वाचायला नाही मिळालं. लौकरच मिळेल असं वाटतंय.
Let the blog world get filled with your fragrance.
Thanks for coming in 'MERI PATRIKA'. I hope you will now write something new in your blog.
I am waiting for....
it was really magic touch............. & excellent expressions...................
congratulations.............
thanks and love ur flowers..
-latahaya
पिंकी को न्याय मिले इस अभियान में आप सहयोग करे
bahut achha hai
roses bhi kafi pyare hai
mahak Its our inner feelings which comes out through our words ,In my mirror mind something seems reflecting ,This is reality in human life .babhai
nice post
नजरे इनायत करने के लिये धन्यवाद
only poet ,
only poem,
can inter such kind of word
- A world of emotion
- A world of Love
Great
Ranjit
Nice poem.
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }
Sundar kavita.
Kripya ise update karti rahen.
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }
aap apne aap se naraz kyon ho.kuchh to likha karo man halka ho jayega.asha hai jaroor likhogi.dhanybaad
mahek ji,
aap apne aap se naraz kyon ho.kuchh to likha karo man halka ho jayega.asha hai jaroor likhogi.dhanybaad
Its so beautiful poem
@farukkhabadi ji,hum bhala apne aap se kyun naraz rahenge:),actualy am not very active on this blog,whenever i feel i write here,am more active on my hindi blog,http://mehhekk.wordpress.com/
wow! magic of words.......
excellent..
effect of ur magic touch...।
अच्छी सोच, बेहतर शब्द और कायदे से लिपिबध्द।
God bless.
जी शुक्रिया मेरे ब्लॉग पर आकर उसे एक नज़र देखने का और विचारों को सराहने के लिये , बस एक छोटी सी कोशिश की है, लिखने का वक्त नही मिलता बस अभी शुरुयात की है । वैसे ,सच में बहुत खूबसूरत लिखती हैं आप । आपका ब्लॉग आज ही देखा है, मुझे अच्छा लगा ।
thanks.lovely poem.
chahati hun dilon mein mahekti rahun
main hun khushabu wafa ki hawa chahiye.
Touch touches only when nothing touches you any more.
Touching one!
Neelesh Jainhttp://www.yoursaarathi.blogspot.com/
Real magic.
-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’
{ Secretary-TSALIIM & SBAI }
nice poem.
a nice poem,very well expressed.thanks for coming to my blog.
beautiful mahek ji nice to c urs blogs ....its really very gud
please visit my blogs too
hope must u enjoy
aapki MAGIC TOUCH ne sachmuch magic kar diya aur blog is too beautiful .....gulabon ki tarah MAHAKTA hai ...
beautifully penned.. :)
wonderful poems.keep it up.
http://vipingoyal.wordpress.com/
महक जी
स्वतंत्रता दिवस की हार्दिक शुभकामनायें
Why no new poem for such a long time.......
Nice
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