Friday, February 13, 2009

On the love song

On this path of love song
We have been together since long
The beautiful moments we share
And two as one in our every prayer


Can feel the same warmth in ur breath
Still now when u come near
And when ur lips rest on mine
Still it gives the same shiver

Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew
Sometimes we were apart
Touchwood those moments were few

Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear

So many memories in loveland
Written on the golden sand
Am so much blessed one
Being secure and safe in ur hand

Lets play the love rhythm again
Lets step together and dance
Let our souls meet in passion
When still we have chance


Come now,love music is on
Hold me in ur arms
We will keep going on
Till enchanted with love charms


Wish the heaven shower rainbows
Wish now each love ray shine
Can I take the oppurtunity to say
In every life,wish u be always mine.

64 comments:

Rashmi Kiran said...

Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear

beautiful lines...

rs00033@gmail.com said...

ब्लॉग पर पधारे और इतनी
खूबसूरत टिपण्णी की .
दिल से बहुत-२ धन्यवाद्.

Yuva said...

प्रकृति ने हमें केवल प्रेम के लिए यहाँ भेजा है. इसे किसी दायरे में नहीं बाधा जा सकता है. बस इसे सही तरीके से परिभाषित करने की आवश्यकता है. ***वैलेंटाइन डे की आप सभी को बहुत-बहुत बधाइयाँ***
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'युवा' ब्लॉग पर आपकी अनुपम अभिव्यक्तियों का स्वागत है !!!

Mrs. Asha Joglekar said...

वेलेंटाइन दिवस की प्यार भरी शुभ कामनाएँ । नेहेमीच तुझ्या कमेंटस आवडतात . आभार .

Mrs. Asha Joglekar said...

The beautiful moments we share
And two as one in our every prayer
सुंदर भाव अन सुंदर शब्द .

महामंत्री - तस्लीम said...

खूबसुरत एहसासों का सुन्दर बयान।

योगेन्द्र मौदगिल said...

वाह...... नाइस..

Dr. Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi said...

Mujhe yeh dekhkar behad khushi hai
Mahek ki shairi mein tazgi hai

Bahut purkaif hai rang e taghazzul
Neshaat o kif o masti sarkhusi hai

Hai angrezi mein unki shairi khoob
Numayaan jis se husn e zindagi hai
Dr.Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi

प्रवीण पराशर said...

So many memories in loveland
Written on the golden sand
Am so much blessed one
Being secure and safe in ur hand
lovely ...lines ...

डुबेजी said...

wah.........good one

Pratap said...

these words take me into a very beautiful imaginary world...where only two persons belong..first me and the other one- the fairy of my childhood tells.

ताऊ रामपुरिया said...

बहुत सुंदर.

रामराम.

Shamikh Faraz said...

mahan main aapka bahut bahut shukraguzar hu k aapne mre blog par comment kiya

चण्डीदत्त शुक्ल said...

खूब खूबसूरत खयालात हैं आपके. चौराहे पर आईं, हौसला बढ़ाया, इसके लिए धन्यवाद. फ़िलहाल चौराहे पर कई रास्ते जल्द ही और मिलेंगे. सब पर आपकी क़दमताल सुनाई दे, यही आरज़ू।

amitabhpriyadarshi said...

Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew
Sometimes we were apart
Touchwood those moments were few



Wish the heaven shower rainbows
Wish now each love ray shine
Can I take the oppurtunity to say
In every life,wish u be always mine.

beautiful lines...

मुकेश कुमार तिवारी said...

Mehek,

The Marvelous coining of lines :-

Can feel the same warmth in ur breath
Still now when u come near
And when ur lips rest on mine
Still it gives the same shiver

The couplets are with souldeep emotions. Keep it up.

Thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comments.

Mukesh K. Tiwari

poemsnpuja said...

beautifully written. i specially liked these
Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew

रावेंद्रकुमार रवि said...

Really ouderful!

meri marzi said...

really yaar u forced me to think deeply about love. but tumhara blog dekh or pad k mujhe mehsus hua tumme sakshaat love rehta hai. mujhe lagta hai agar aap isse 14 ko likhte to or bhi mast likhte.

harsh said...

Beautiful lines... Love is eternal and pure!

Harkirat Haqeer said...

Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear....

Waah Mehak ji aapne to Mehka diya....!!

अनिल कान्त : said...

lovely poem mehak

Prem Farrukhabadi said...

Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew
Sometimes we were apart
Touchwood those moments were few
Very well written. congratulation!!!

भारतीय नागरिक - Indian Citizen said...

यद्यपि मैं अंग्रेजी की कवितायें कम ही पढ़ता हूं लेकिन आपकी रचना खूबसूरत हैं.

सुमित प्रताप सिंह said...

सादर ब्लॉगस्ते,

कृपया पधारें व 'एक पत्र फिज़ा चाची के नाम'पर अपनी टिप्पणी के रूप में अपने विचार प्रस्तुत करें।

आपकी प्रतीक्षा में...

PN Subramanian said...

That was great.

इरशाद अली said...

wah ji wah....so creative and uniqe.

अविनाश said...

Lets play the love rhythm again
Lets step together and dance
Let our souls meet in passion
When still we have chance


Nicely composed

अविनाश said...

Wishing Happy holi 2 u and ur family

Dr. Chandra Kumar Jain said...

स्वाभाविक और गहन अभिव्यक्ति
प्रार्थना की तरह प्रेम की.
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डॉ.चन्द्रकुमार जैन

Udan Tashtari said...

सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति...


बधाई.

नीरज गोस्वामी said...

Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear

Excellent expressions...superb.

Neeraj

डॉ. रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री मयंक said...

अपनी मातृ-भाषा में,

कुछ शब्द ढाल दो बहन महक।

सुन्दर भावों की ये कविता,

बोल उठेगी, चहक-चहक।।

harsh said...

nice...

harsh said...

nice...

कुमार मुकुल said...

वाह आपका ब्‍लाग तो खूबसूरत है और अच्‍छी रचनाएं भी हैं, क्‍या आप मेरे एकाध गीतों का अंग्रेजी में अनुवाद कर सकती हैं

आचार्य संजीव वर्मा 'सलिल' said...

भावनाओं औ' कामनाओं का

जब-जब हाथ मिला.

तब-तब ही मन के उपवन में

कविता-सुमन खिला.

दिग्-दिगंत को किया सुवासित,

चहक रहे मन-प्राण.

'सलिल' महक ने आस-प्यास को

पल में दिया मिला.

.

Prem Farrukhabadi said...

mehek ji
Can feel the same warmth in ur breath
Still now when u come near
And when ur lips rest on mine
Still it gives the same shiver

your poem is full of life. keep it up dear.

रवीन्द्र दास said...

even love doesnot mean anything,but the moment.

ravi sharma said...

beautiful narrations. plz visit terimeriuskibaat.blogspot.com for my poetic expressions. thanx for visiting my blog.

ravi sharma said...

beautiful narrations. plz visit terimeriuskibaat.blogspot.com for my poetic expressions. thanx for visiting my blog.

Ketan Kanaujia said...

' Seven are they... the colors of rainbow;
We call them just one, they are separate though,
Together we'll live our lives in same way;
When you're with me, I'll be your shadow !! '


very nice poem.. :)

Regards,
Ketan

Pramod Kumar Kush 'tanha' said...

Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew
Sometimes we were apart
Touchwood those moments were few

.... waiting for some more beautiful lines ...

Komal said...

thanks for ur comment,

परमजीत बाली said...

बहुत सुन्दर।

Kavi Kulwant said...

beautiful..

Harkirat Haqeer said...

Seven are they... the colors of rainbow;
We call them just one, they are separate though,
Together we'll live our lives in same way;
When you're with me, I'll be your shadow !! '

beautiful lines...

Harkirat Haqeer said...

Seven are they... the colors of rainbow;
We call them just one, they are separate though,
Together we'll live our lives in same way;
When you're with me, I'll be your shadow !! '

beautiful lines...

Dev said...

Come now,love music is on
Hold me in ur arms
We will keep going on
Till enchanted with love charms

Mehek really loveable poem....

संदीप शर्मा said...

nice post
:-)

Navnit Nirav said...

if any one writes lines by heart words become beautiful.
Thank u
Navnit Nirav

सागर said...

beautiful feelings...!

..and THANX for visiting my blog "sagarnaama" and appriciating my poem. Keep it up.

God bless!

मोहिन्दर कुमार said...

Beautiful flow of thoughts and expression... keep it up

भारतीय नागरिक - Indian Citizen said...

मैं अंग्रेजी में थोडा़ कम पढ़ता हूं इसलिये आपकी कविताओं से दूर रह गया.

ajit.irs62 said...

its lovely song indeed. congrats

Harsh said...

well done, nice post........

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Vijay Kumar Sappatti said...

mehak ji ...

aaj aapki kavitayen padh raha hoon bahut der se ... kya kahun , sab ki sab shaandar hai ..aur ye kavita to man ko choo gayi hai ..

specially ye waali lines..

Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear
..

aapko bahut badhai .. meri nayi poem padhiyenga pls .

regards

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Inder said...

Very nicely written, emotional content is maintained throughout...
Inder

ujjwal subhash said...

am not within myself

nothing desire much

feel like am being in heaven

effect of ur magic touch.

wahh !!!
kya bat hain maza aagya .......abhi aapke yanah aaker to samjh nahi paya ki kis kis rachna per tipni sab ek se bhadh kar hain nayabi ke namoone hain behad khoobsuraty se ukera hain aap ne jajabaton ko...........bahut subhkamnayen

ujjwal subhash said...

am not within myself

nothing desire much

feel like am being in heaven

effect of ur magic touch.

wah!!!
aap ke yaha per aake to esha lagta hain kis kis najm pe kuch kahu har rachna bemishali ka namoona hain ..

behad khubsuraty se ukerty hain aap jajabat ko.......... fir wo urdu hindi ya fri english hikyu na ho ...........andaje bayan ka kayal hu aap ki Mehak ji

or mere yanah aane ka sukariya or or aap ka coment bahut pasnd aaya

पी.सी.गोदियाल said...

So many memories in loveland
Written on the golden sand
Am so much blessed one
Being secure and safe in ur hand

Beautiful !!

angel said...

owsome yaaar.........
Seems as someone's has opened his heart before you...
No words can judge u...u r a beautiful person..loving,caring,gorgeous...perfect!!
Love your heart....no words..jst hats off!!!