On this path of love song
We have been together since long
The beautiful moments we share
And two as one in our every prayer
Can feel the same warmth in ur breath
Still now when u come near
And when ur lips rest on mine
Still it gives the same shiver
Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew
Sometimes we were apart
Touchwood those moments were few
Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear
So many memories in loveland
Written on the golden sand
Am so much blessed one
Being secure and safe in ur hand
Lets play the love rhythm again
Lets step together and dance
Let our souls meet in passion
When still we have chance
Come now,love music is on
Hold me in ur arms
We will keep going on
Till enchanted with love charms
Wish the heaven shower rainbows
Wish now each love ray shine
Can I take the oppurtunity to say
In every life,wish u be always mine.
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Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear
beautiful lines...
ब्लॉग पर पधारे और इतनी
खूबसूरत टिपण्णी की .
दिल से बहुत-२ धन्यवाद्.
प्रकृति ने हमें केवल प्रेम के लिए यहाँ भेजा है. इसे किसी दायरे में नहीं बाधा जा सकता है. बस इसे सही तरीके से परिभाषित करने की आवश्यकता है. ***वैलेंटाइन डे की आप सभी को बहुत-बहुत बधाइयाँ***
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'युवा' ब्लॉग पर आपकी अनुपम अभिव्यक्तियों का स्वागत है !!!
वेलेंटाइन दिवस की प्यार भरी शुभ कामनाएँ । नेहेमीच तुझ्या कमेंटस आवडतात . आभार .
The beautiful moments we share
And two as one in our every prayer
सुंदर भाव अन सुंदर शब्द .
खूबसुरत एहसासों का सुन्दर बयान।
वाह...... नाइस..
Mujhe yeh dekhkar behad khushi hai
Mahek ki shairi mein tazgi hai
Bahut purkaif hai rang e taghazzul
Neshaat o kif o masti sarkhusi hai
Hai angrezi mein unki shairi khoob
Numayaan jis se husn e zindagi hai
Dr.Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi
So many memories in loveland
Written on the golden sand
Am so much blessed one
Being secure and safe in ur hand
lovely ...lines ...
wah.........good one
these words take me into a very beautiful imaginary world...where only two persons belong..first me and the other one- the fairy of my childhood tells.
बहुत सुंदर.
रामराम.
mahan main aapka bahut bahut shukraguzar hu k aapne mre blog par comment kiya
खूब खूबसूरत खयालात हैं आपके. चौराहे पर आईं, हौसला बढ़ाया, इसके लिए धन्यवाद. फ़िलहाल चौराहे पर कई रास्ते जल्द ही और मिलेंगे. सब पर आपकी क़दमताल सुनाई दे, यही आरज़ू।
Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew
Sometimes we were apart
Touchwood those moments were few
Wish the heaven shower rainbows
Wish now each love ray shine
Can I take the oppurtunity to say
In every life,wish u be always mine.
beautiful lines...
Mehek,
The Marvelous coining of lines :-
Can feel the same warmth in ur breath
Still now when u come near
And when ur lips rest on mine
Still it gives the same shiver
The couplets are with souldeep emotions. Keep it up.
Thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comments.
Mukesh K. Tiwari
beautifully written. i specially liked these
Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew
Really ouderful!
really yaar u forced me to think deeply about love. but tumhara blog dekh or pad k mujhe mehsus hua tumme sakshaat love rehta hai. mujhe lagta hai agar aap isse 14 ko likhte to or bhi mast likhte.
Beautiful lines... Love is eternal and pure!
Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear....
Waah Mehak ji aapne to Mehka diya....!!
lovely poem mehak
Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew
Sometimes we were apart
Touchwood those moments were few
Very well written. congratulation!!!
यद्यपि मैं अंग्रेजी की कवितायें कम ही पढ़ता हूं लेकिन आपकी रचना खूबसूरत हैं.
सादर ब्लॉगस्ते,
कृपया पधारें व 'एक पत्र फिज़ा चाची के नाम'पर अपनी टिप्पणी के रूप में अपने विचार प्रस्तुत करें।
आपकी प्रतीक्षा में...
That was great.
wah ji wah....so creative and uniqe.
Lets play the love rhythm again
Lets step together and dance
Let our souls meet in passion
When still we have chance
Nicely composed
Wishing Happy holi 2 u and ur family
स्वाभाविक और गहन अभिव्यक्ति
प्रार्थना की तरह प्रेम की.
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डॉ.चन्द्रकुमार जैन
सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति...
बधाई.
Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear
Excellent expressions...superb.
Neeraj
अपनी मातृ-भाषा में,
कुछ शब्द ढाल दो बहन महक।
सुन्दर भावों की ये कविता,
बोल उठेगी, चहक-चहक।।
nice...
nice...
वाह आपका ब्लाग तो खूबसूरत है और अच्छी रचनाएं भी हैं, क्या आप मेरे एकाध गीतों का अंग्रेजी में अनुवाद कर सकती हैं
भावनाओं औ' कामनाओं का
जब-जब हाथ मिला.
तब-तब ही मन के उपवन में
कविता-सुमन खिला.
दिग्-दिगंत को किया सुवासित,
चहक रहे मन-प्राण.
'सलिल' महक ने आस-प्यास को
पल में दिया मिला.
.
mehek ji
Can feel the same warmth in ur breath
Still now when u come near
And when ur lips rest on mine
Still it gives the same shiver
your poem is full of life. keep it up dear.
even love doesnot mean anything,but the moment.
beautiful narrations. plz visit terimeriuskibaat.blogspot.com for my poetic expressions. thanx for visiting my blog.
beautiful narrations. plz visit terimeriuskibaat.blogspot.com for my poetic expressions. thanx for visiting my blog.
' Seven are they... the colors of rainbow;
We call them just one, they are separate though,
Together we'll live our lives in same way;
When you're with me, I'll be your shadow !! '
very nice poem.. :)
Regards,
Ketan
Our love is still so new
Like the freshness of morning dew
Sometimes we were apart
Touchwood those moments were few
.... waiting for some more beautiful lines ...
thanks for ur comment,
बहुत सुन्दर।
beautiful..
Seven are they... the colors of rainbow;
We call them just one, they are separate though,
Together we'll live our lives in same way;
When you're with me, I'll be your shadow !! '
beautiful lines...
Seven are they... the colors of rainbow;
We call them just one, they are separate though,
Together we'll live our lives in same way;
When you're with me, I'll be your shadow !! '
beautiful lines...
Come now,love music is on
Hold me in ur arms
We will keep going on
Till enchanted with love charms
Mehek really loveable poem....
nice post
:-)
if any one writes lines by heart words become beautiful.
Thank u
Navnit Nirav
beautiful feelings...!
..and THANX for visiting my blog "sagarnaama" and appriciating my poem. Keep it up.
God bless!
Beautiful flow of thoughts and expression... keep it up
मैं अंग्रेजी में थोडा़ कम पढ़ता हूं इसलिये आपकी कविताओं से दूर रह गया.
its lovely song indeed. congrats
well done, nice post........
A very good blog.Please visit my story.
mehak ji ...
aaj aapki kavitayen padh raha hoon bahut der se ... kya kahun , sab ki sab shaandar hai ..aur ye kavita to man ko choo gayi hai ..
specially ye waali lines..
Even now deep in ur eyes
Can see how much u care
Can listen to ur heartbeats in me
Thats why I never fear
..
aapko bahut badhai .. meri nayi poem padhiyenga pls .
regards
Hope ur wish is fulfilled...all my prayes!
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Very nicely written, emotional content is maintained throughout...
Inder
am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch.
wahh !!!
kya bat hain maza aagya .......abhi aapke yanah aaker to samjh nahi paya ki kis kis rachna per tipni sab ek se bhadh kar hain nayabi ke namoone hain behad khoobsuraty se ukera hain aap ne jajabaton ko...........bahut subhkamnayen
am not within myself
nothing desire much
feel like am being in heaven
effect of ur magic touch.
wah!!!
aap ke yaha per aake to esha lagta hain kis kis najm pe kuch kahu har rachna bemishali ka namoona hain ..
behad khubsuraty se ukerty hain aap jajabat ko.......... fir wo urdu hindi ya fri english hikyu na ho ...........andaje bayan ka kayal hu aap ki Mehak ji
or mere yanah aane ka sukariya or or aap ka coment bahut pasnd aaya
So many memories in loveland
Written on the golden sand
Am so much blessed one
Being secure and safe in ur hand
Beautiful !!
owsome yaaar.........
Seems as someone's has opened his heart before you...
No words can judge u...u r a beautiful person..loving,caring,gorgeous...perfect!!
Love your heart....no words..jst hats off!!!
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