Tuesday, April 29, 2008

innocent

Innocent

When u make ur cute smile
And then call me from behind
I cnt understand any of ur words
But can feel the affection so kind
And when u put ur cheek on mine
And give hugs and kisses in a line
I can feel warmth in ur touch
Ur heart has a golden shine
Ur not selfish,ur so pure
This I can say
Coz u love all
In the same way
Today this quality is so rare
Coz now the world is very soar
So many unwanted things happen here
But no one has time to think and care
Don?t ever change in ur life
Keep all nice qualities as same
I also wish to become like u
Oh baby the innocent one.

22 comments:

pallavi trivedi said...

ur poem is as innocent as a baby....i could feel the warmth of love.

Dr. Chandra Kumar Jain said...

Don?t ever change in ur life
Keep all nice qualities as same
I also wish to become like u
Oh baby the innocent one.
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ispiring lines!
beautiful poem!!

congrats.

©डा0अनिल चडड़ा(Dr.Anil Chadah) said...

Beautiful expression, mehekkji. Please do visit my blog http://multiplexblog.blogspot.com for some of my english poems

Imran Jalandhari said...

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

take care
bye

आशीष कुमार 'अंशु' said...

Nice One

©डा0अनिल चडड़ा(Dr.Anil Chadah) said...

mehek ji,

u have visited my blog http://multiplexblog.blogspot.com and appreciated my poems. I am really thankful to u.

pramod kumar kush 'tanha' said...

"I also wish to become like u ..."
It says every thing.

what a way to sum up the love and innocence in one line.
Excellent poem , expressed so simply yet so beautifully...

प्रियम्बरा said...

So sweet.this is really an innocent piece of art.

anitakumar said...

Mehek thank you very much for visiting my blog and liking the poem. Since there is no email id on your blog I thank you personally and am leaving a note here. By the way your blog is beautiful and I fell in love with the slide show, lovely pictures, please teach me also na from where you got those photos.

UttaM said...

bacche man ke sacche..
So thoughtful and soul searching

Regards

Uttam

मोहिन्दर कुमार said...

This is my first visit to your blog.....its nice one and content is quite interesting and meaning full....keep writing....my return is assured.

mohinder
http://dildarpan.blogspot.com
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अरूणा राय said...

mwaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!

महामंत्री (तस्लीम ) said...

सुन्दर विचार, खूबसूरत अभिव्यक्ति।

PATKATHA said...

nice and very touchy.

Suresh Chandra Gupta said...

You are right, love has become so rare today. We have to bring love back in our lives.

नीरज गोस्वामी said...

Excellent poetry. Why didi you stop writting after 29th April 2008? Let the feelings flow freely. And...Thanks for visiting my blog.

Neeraj

aruna rai said...

nice

pooja said...

its beautiful and innocent as a child.

ilesh said...

When u make ur cute smile
And then call me from behind
I cnt understand any of ur words
But can feel the affection so kind

superb......

makrand said...

thanks mehek
it nice to read the poem
u envisage innocent feeling to explore at u r expection of emotions
keep writing
baby i always remain too
but time never alow me to do,
let s hope
the golden days of child hood
will remain in memories for ever
regards

SHUAIB said...

WaHh !!!

Harish Karamchandani said...

heart-touching words pure original &natural