Ever since u confessed,
Am urs ,and u mine
My Thoughts have changed there,
All paths and lines
Everything circles around u
My day ,my night,
Before the time never passed
Now cnt tk u out of sight
Whatever I try to think in mind
U r always first,
Hv never mate u
Still have , lot of trust
Never had the feeling so good
Is this love what people say
Then am in love with u
Want to convey
Something has changed in my inside
Something which I cnt explain
Within me there is happiness
Glittering always.
Now waiting for that time
When I can see,
That movement so special
Which will belong
Only to you and me.
Thursday, February 7, 2008
Only you and me.
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Whatever I try to think in mind
You are always first,
Have never met you
Still have , lot of trust...
Vow ! What a simple way to express 'the deep feelings' in beautiful poetry !
Many congratulations...
p k kush'tanha'
find it so good, mehek is fabulous...
'now waiting for that time.......
that's wonderful
vikram
well... needn't 2 say that yor poetry are touching..but what i loved most... was yor intro..
"like to run in spring like to walk by ocean with the wind i go towards the beautiful sky to feel the passion of love as much as high"
wud love to talk ya more.. waiting 4 you at ajaykumar.saxena@gmail.com.
c ya
good one.feelings with correct words...
An act of Love and Kindness May not change the Course of history, but if changes someones life, it is worth it.
Love is like a butterfly. It goes where it pleases
And it pleasews where it goes
M. R. J
beautiful poem Mahak
when those moments have passed....nothing much will be left..still nice poem..
The complete poem gives me a nice feeling.
Specially these lines
Now waiting for that time
When I can see,
That movement so special
Which will belong
Only to you and me.
nice job Mehek
I liked this poem. Your ability to handle English syntax is remarkable.
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