Thursday, February 7, 2008

Only you and me.

Ever since u confessed,
Am urs ,and u mine
My Thoughts have changed there,
All paths and lines

Everything circles around u
My day ,my night,
Before the time never passed
Now cnt tk u out of sight

Whatever I try to think in mind
U r always first,
Hv never mate u
Still have , lot of trust

Never had the feeling so good
Is this love what people say
Then am in love with u
Want to convey

Something has changed in my inside
Something which I cnt explain
Within me there is happiness
Glittering always.

Now waiting for that time
When I can see,
That movement so special
Which will belong
Only to you and me.




10 comments:

pramod kumar kush 'tanha' said...

Whatever I try to think in mind
You are always first,
Have never met you
Still have , lot of trust...

Vow ! What a simple way to express 'the deep feelings' in beautiful poetry !

Many congratulations...
p k kush'tanha'

विनय प्रजापति 'नज़र' said...

find it so good, mehek is fabulous...

singh said...

'now waiting for that time.......
that's wonderful
vikram

Anonymous said...

well... needn't 2 say that yor poetry are touching..but what i loved most... was yor intro..

"like to run in spring like to walk by ocean with the wind i go towards the beautiful sky to feel the passion of love as much as high"

wud love to talk ya more.. waiting 4 you at ajaykumar.saxena@gmail.com.

c ya

Menka said...

good one.feelings with correct words...

M.R.J said...

An act of Love and Kindness May not change the Course of history, but if changes someones life, it is worth it.
Love is like a butterfly. It goes where it pleases
And it pleasews where it goes
M. R. J

अल्पना वर्मा said...

beautiful poem Mahak

pearl neelima said...

when those moments have passed....nothing much will be left..still nice poem..

Shashank said...

The complete poem gives me a nice feeling.
Specially these lines
Now waiting for that time
When I can see,
That movement so special
Which will belong
Only to you and me.


nice job Mehek

P A Ramchandra said...

I liked this poem. Your ability to handle English syntax is remarkable.