Friday, January 4, 2008

Will u be there

Will u be there to be with me always
whenever i will need u as myself
when in dark clouds i get lost
will u be there as sunray to guide me
over the path of life,holding my hand
will u take me to the world where the stars meet
were the warmth of hugs never die
in your arms i will feel and cry then
when u will lingere on my cheeks
as my shining tears,with happiness
will u feel my world ,with life of love
i want you to be mine,to hold me tight
to never leave me anytime in this world alone
and the one i will adorn for whole journey
so will u give me that love,to love me?.

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14 comments:

Pramod Kumar Kush 'tanha' said...

will u feel my world ,
with life of love
i want you to be mine,
to hold me tight
to never leave me anytime
in this world alone
and the one i will adorn
for whole journey
so will u give me that love,
to love me?.

-Just superb expressions in soft but touching poetry . I liked it. Please accept my heartiest congratulations ....
- p k kush 'tanha'

Anonymous said...

will u be there as sunray to guide me,
over the path of life,holding my hand...

these lines are verygood and promising...

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Rajesh Gupta said...

nicely crafted.

Alpana Verma said...

really touching

Anonymous said...

Well written article.

Sulabh Jaiswal "सुलभ" said...

Your words are compelling.
Filled with emotions and nicely penetrating.

यूँ ही महकते रहो. शुक्रिया
- सुलभ ( यादों का इंद्रजाल )

Naveen Tyagi said...

man ko sparsh kiya.

Dr. Ravi Srivastava said...

नमस्कार!
आज मुझे आप का ब्लॉग देखने का सुअवसर मिला।
वाकई आपने बहुत अच्छा लिखा है। आप की रचनाएँ, स्टाइल अन्य सबसे थोड़ा हट के है....आप का ब्लॉग पढ़कर ऐसा मुझे लगा. आशा है आपकी कलम इसी तरह चलती रहेगी और हमें अच्छी -अच्छी रचनाएं पढ़ने को मिलेंगे. बधाई स्वीकारें।

आप मेरे ब्लॉग पर आए और एक उत्साहवर्द्धक कमेन्ट दिया, शुक्रिया.

…Ravi Srivastava

Umesh Pathak / उमेश पाठक said...

स्वप्न यह बार-बार आया है ,
मैंने पा कर तुम्हे गवाया है,
जब भी चाह कपाट बंद कर लूं ,
कितना कमज़ोर खुद को पाया है!
बहुत सुंदर रचना :बधाइयाँ!
- उमेश पाठक

Umesh Pathak / उमेश पाठक said...

स्वप्न यह बार-बार आया है ,
मैंने पा कर तुम्हे गवाया है,
जब भी चाह कपाट बंद कर लूं ,
कितना कमज़ोर खुद को पाया है!
बहुत सुंदर रचना :बधाइयाँ!
-उमेश पाठक

Rajat Narula said...

its just brilliant , great work great thought process very interesting...

Anonymous said...

सुन्दर मोहक अभिव्यक्ति

M VERMA said...

beautiful sensitive poem